Revision+work

Summer Revision Work
You are to take your summer essay and revise the thinking or ideas from it. This revision incorporates your reflections and class discussions, so this draft is more sophisticated and polished. It may incorporate a shift in your thesis or even a complete rethinking. It is **not** necessary to incorporate all my brilliant comments, as tempting as that may be! What I am looking for is the kind of revision you will be expected to do on your own to produce a final draft. The rubric on the other side will be the criteria on which I grade your essays.

You must submit both your first and second draft when you turn your paper in, along with the rubric.
 * Requirements: **

You must include a **process paragraph**. This paragraph should explain what you learned or how you approached this revision, the decisions you made and why. That said, **I only want one paragraph!** Like we have done so far this year, please include what you would like me to focus on within the criteria of the essay.


 * Due: Friday, September 24th **


 * Please download rubric here: **